Friday, August 14, 2015

Writing Term 3


Writing Progressions 1P:
I am learning to

  • add some detail to my writing
  • choose words to make my writing more interesting
We wrote about about a Kapa Haka Performance that we watched in the auditorium during Māori Language Week.  First we wrote 2 sentences and then the next day we added some more writing to make our stories more interesting.

"I like writing about dinosaurs.  I like writing about cars.  I can write my own sentence."
Terrence

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

You are able to write independently now Terrence. You like reading your stories to me and I like hearing them. Keep working hard.